well I delete the story because I did not get any coms but 1 so I mite post a other ones but I dont know I think that people dont really get it and have mixed feeling about the story so the next one I post will not be true but it will take some time to get it right if I even post any more on here. good writers get most of there good stories from things that happen in there life or others around them so the next one will be about the wrong things that people do in life. some will be true some will not can u tell?